Showing posts with label stock phrases are the death of style. Show all posts
Showing posts with label stock phrases are the death of style. Show all posts

Saturday, December 4, 2021

Analysis of Prose

Example 1: He saw ruin all about him.
Acceptable.
Example 2: He saw wrack all about him.
Acceptable.
Example 3: He saw wrack and ruin all about him.
Cut that out.