Addendum

For even more realism, carry it over to the sequel.

How to Increase the Realism of Your Story

An eight-page sequence of somebody trying to get a pebble out of his shoe. He isn't sure it's a pebble exactly, but it's annoying, whatever it is.

History Corner

Did you know . . . that shoes were not always divided into left and right feet? But the power elite wants to split us apart so we never realize our strength and topple it.